Wednesday, 27 August 2014

Wiamairi beach recount

Hey some of you should know I like do writing.Here is a piece of writing I did in term one.

THE AMAZING BEACH DAY
When I pranced out of the car a scent of salt water grabbed my nose. As we went up the steps to the club house the shouting of the waves grabbed my attention and got me excited.
As Jade and Louise told us what we were doing I couldn’t wait to get started. I was amazed when I saw everyone’s stunning castles after morning tea. After lunch we did some extremely fun games. After that we all got into our colourful swim suits and went inside. Room three were the dolphins and room one were the turtle ducks. The dolphins did boogie boarding first and the turtle ducks did swimming first.
When it was the dolphins turn to go swimming we dived over to the salty sand .We rolled all over the sand to make ourselves into salty sand monsters. Afterwards we were smothered in sand. We shrieked ‘WOOH’ we dove into the humongous waves and glided over there salty surface. When we all got into our uniforms we said thank you to Jade and Louise for having us. We all got sorted into cars. On the way back Miss Gaskin got us ice-creams. I got a lemonade and raspberry twist. I felt the power to go back again with my family.

4 comments:

  1. wow you are such a good writer well done

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    1. Thank you very much Olivia I would like to see one of your pieces of writing.

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  2. Great work rachel

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  3. Rachel did you like swimming.

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